So, this one's a bit hard to talk about. I did this one during the week of when I had to re-take a teacher's examination, a bunch of Oak Street Blues shows that I had to play bass at, the first day at my new job, and WonderCon. Needless to say, I had a busy week and so I can honestly say this one is far from perfect. It's a damn shame too because I thought the premise was brilliant even if it had already done by other people. If you haven't figured it out, this piece was a satire on the film adaptation of The Lorax. The original work's theme of environmentalism seemed to have been lost in the film adaptation, which had plenty of commercial tie-ins including IHOP, AMC theaters, and the strangest of them all: the Mazda CX-5 automobile.The writing was there, but it definitely needed refinement. It just comes off as a bit awkward to read. I think if you don't get that the Grunion is supposed to be speaking in sing-song-y rhymes, the Dr. Seuss connection may be lost. The parodies made in this comic are the IHOW and the Mazduh, which I pretty much ripped off the design of the Canyonero from The Simpsons.
The last thing I want to point out is that this comic features Dissect My Brain contest winner, D.J. Watts. He won the contest on facebook in which a picture was given for contestants to provide their own dialogue. Hopefully I will use him more on strips, but as it stands, this is his debut on the Union Weekly run.
Original Publication: March 19, 2012.
Union Weekly Vol. 70 Issue #9.












